A few months ago I asked what types of blog posts you guys would like to see more of, and there was an overwhelming response for craft-based posts. And I’m right there with you. There is a lot to say on the craft of writing—entire shelves are dedicated to it in most bookstores!—but no matter how much has been written before, it seems we’re always discovering or rediscovering new techniques to apply to our work. I love reading new craft guides and am constantly flipping through writing magazines or checking my favorite writers’ blogs to see what new information they may have to share.
By far my favorite craft-related articles, books, and posts are those in which a writer talks about their process.
Do you outline, or do you wing it? Are you a speedy first-drafter, or do you take days to perfect each page before moving on? How long do you let sit in between drafts? Do you work with critique partners, and how many, and when do they see it?
I’m fascinated by other authors’ processes, because no two are the same. I’ll often hear an author talk about an element of their process and think, I could NEVER write like that! Other times I might think, Oh, that’s a great idea! I’m going to give that a shot. It may stick and it may not, but we are changing and growing creatures, and I think it’s smart to try new things once in a while. You just never know.
My writing process continues to change and adapt as I grow more confident in my ability to actually write an entire novel. (Three published novels in the world and some days I still can’t believe it!) I’m learning to trust my writer instincts. I’ve become more familiar with my own creative needs and am learning to recognize, for example, the difference between letting an idea simmer for a while longer vs. straight-up procrastination.
Each book comes with unique challenges that can change how I approach it. But the basic structure of my process, from that first spark of an idea to turning in a completed manuscript, doesn’t seem to vary a whole lot.
Not everything that I do will work for you, and that’s okay. It’s good to figure out what does and doesn’t work for us and to stay true to our creative selves. I hope these posts will bring comfort to those of you who share a similar process, and motivation to try something new to those of you who don’t. And I hope all readers will find it interesting—if not outright helpful—to see how I work through the stages of each book.
Most important, I hope this series of posts will inspire you to write, whatever your process might be.
Read the full series:
1. Brainstorming & Research
2. The Outline
3. The First Draft
4. Simmering Periods
5. The Second Draft
7. Beta Readers & Final Revisions
8. Tweaking & Polishing
9. The Publisher’s Editorial Process
The people have voted, the votes have been tallied, and I am pleased to announce the winners of the Lunar Chronicles Sticker Contest!
Thank you to EVERYONE who entered. It is always a delight to see the brilliant and beautiful things you guys come up with and I thoroughly enjoyed perusing through all of the entries. (Even though it is SO HARD to narrow them down to so few winners!)
You can see all of the entries here: http://www.pinterest.com/marissameyer22/design-a-tlc-sticker-contest/
Before we get on to the winners, I wanted to draw attention to some of my personal beloved designs.
There were many beautiful entries, but these three literally had my jaw dropping, because HOLY COW YOU PEOPLE ARE TALENTED.
And I adore-adored these two for absolute ADORABLENESS:
Prize: All honorable mentions will receive a swag pack of Lunar Chronicles goodies.
(See all six finalists here: http://www.marissameyer.com/blogtype/vote-for-your-favorite-sticker-design/.)
I would be proud to feature any of your work in my Lunar Chronicles swag and promotion! Well done, all of you!
Prize: All finalists will receive a swag pack of Lunar Chronicles goodies.
PEOPLE’S CHOICE WINNER
Though the competition was tough, the people have voted, and one finalist is our grand prize People’s Choice winner:
CONGRATULATIONS, Julia M.!
Which brings us to the final grand prize winner, for which . . .
I can’t decide.
I SERIOUSLY CAN’T, YOU GUYS.
So because it’s my contest, and my books, and MY GOSH DARN STICKERS… I’ve decided to have TWO Marissa’s Choice Winners.
CONGRATULATIONS, Veronica S. and Tereza!
I am crazy smitten with both of these designs. They are clever, eye-catching, and brilliantly executed. Bravo!
Prizes: The Reader’s Choice and both Marissa’s Choice Winners will each receive a signed book, a limited-edition messenger bag, and lots of fun swag! Plus, all three designs are going to be turned into swanky stickers. Yay!
IMPORTANT: Winner’s, Finalists, and Honorable Mentions, I will contact you LATER THIS WEEK with further details for how to claim your prizes. Like, probably Friday. Sorry for the delay, but I’m heading out of town for a couple of days.
WHERE CAN YOU GET ONE OF THESE AWESOME STICKERS?
Once they’re printed, I’ll have these stickers with me at future tour stops, book signings, and the FAIREST Launch Party. Other opportunities to score stickers and cool swag will be announced in the coming months!
You guys don’t make this easy on a girl, but I somehow managed to narrow the design submissions down to six finalists.
(My goal was to get it down to five but I simply COULD NOT cut any of these six – I love them all so much, and it had already broken my heart to have to cut some other beloved submissions. Because OMG you guys are AMAZING.)
In case anyone is wondering what my thought process was for choosing the finalists, I mostly imagined two scenarios:
1. If I were in high school and I saw this sticker on a classmate’s binder, would it pique my interest enough to ask about it?
2. As an author and promoter of my own books, how much do I want to stick this design EVERYWHERE?
Those two questions, plus a lot of back and forth and hard decisions, led me to our finalists…
And now, YOU guys have the toughest part of all. Voting for the grand prize winner!
I’ve been updating my Pinterest board for the “Design a Sticker Contest” all morning, and some of these entries literally made me gasp. From clever to adorable, stunning to hilarious, the entries are top-notch. You Lunartics have once again outdone yourselves.
All of the entries can be viewed here. Prepare yourself for awesome.
ARTISTS: Please check the board to ensure that your entry is posted. If you don’t see it, contact me asap – either via a comment to this blog post or on Twitter. I know that at least one entry ended up in a spam folder, and I want to make sure I caught all the others.
Finalists should be chosen and posted for voting either tomorrow or Wednesday. How will I narrow it down?
…… I have no clue. *daunted*
Thank you to everyone who entered! I can’t wait to see two of these amazing designs turned into actual stickers!
One question that I’m asked over and over and over again is: Do you have any advice for aspiring writers?
At first, after Cinder had just released, I felt weird answering this question. I still felt like such an amateur myself! What did I know about anything?
But over the past few years I’ve come to realize that, yes, yes I do have advice to give, and a lot of these are things I wish I would have been told years ago. Because while every writer’s process and goals are going to be different, there are some things that I think apply to most of us across the board.
So here is my best advice, to take, or not, as you so choose.
1. First and foremost, write.
Oh, I wish I had a dollar for every time I’ve heard someone say, “I want to be a writer, but I never have time to write!” Or, “I have all these ideas, but when I sit down, nothing comes out!” Or, “I’ve been researching my novel’s setting for fifteen years—I feel like I’ll be ready to start writing it any day now!”
I’m not going to say that all excuses are bad excuses—sometimes you legitimately don’t have time or you’re not ready to start on a particular project. But for the majority of excuses: Stop. Stop making them. Stop tell yourself that you’re not ready or you can’t or you will someday.
So today, now, determine what your writing goals are and when and how you’re going to make them happen, and if your plan doesn’t include actual words on paper within the near future, then rework your plan until it does.
2. Almost as important: Write what you love.
I do think it’s valuable to know what’s happening in the publishing world and what your audience is interested in, but if you’re writing a vampire/dystopian/realistic novel because that’s what editors want, then you have probably already missed that boat. Trends come and go and by the time most of us figure out that something is a trend, it’s already on its way out.
At the same time, who knows? Your novel might hit at the start of the next big trend, that no one has any idea is on the horizon.
My real-life example: When I started writing Cinder the “rule” in publishing was that YOU CANNOT SELL SCIENCE-FICTION TO TEENAGERS. Seriously, you could have asked anyone in the industry. Teens want magic and vampires, not all this techy mumbo-jumbo! But I had my heart set on a story about a cyborg Cinderella and a society of mind-controlling people from outer space trying to invade Earth and I was going to write it even if no one in the whole world would ever read it, because I was so smitten with the idea.
Moral: If you love something—whether it’s yesterday’s news or an up-and-coming genre, write it. Enjoy it. Have fun with it. And hope that the readers will find it when the time is right. That’s the best we can do.
3. Don’t worry about not being “very good.”
Think of your favorite writer. The one that constantly blows you away by their clever plot twists, their marvelous characterization, the way they make the words glow on the page.
And then imagine what that writer’s very first story was like. Or, heck, their first tenstories. Maybe even their first fifty stories.
If you are imagining works of genius, I can tell you that writer would laugh very, very hard.
No one starts out a brilliant writer, or even a decent writer, and I think few writers ever reach a point where we’re like, “By golly, I am amazing.” We are always learning. We are always striving to be better. We can always point out our own weaknesses and flaws, but we’re storytellers, so we keep writing and improving as much as we can.
So don’t quit because you think you suck or you’ll never be as good as So-and-So. We all have to start somewhere.
4. Read craft guides.
I love craft guides. I have read dozens and dozens over the years, and I learn something new with every guide I read. Some are full of general advice, while others focus on one specific craft element like setting or characterization. There are also books on living a writer’s life while maintaining your sanity, or setting goals for yourself, or how to market your work once it’s published.
Three of my personal favorites:
Now—I have heard published, talented, wonderful writers say that they refuse to read craft guides, usually because they worry it would impact their own style or voice. To which part of me thinks: We all have our own process and method and we should do what feels best for our own personal creative path.
But then another part of me thinks: Hogwash.
The thing about rules and tips and advice is that you can choose to ignore them. But at least then you’ll be making an informed decision. You’ll know why you’re ignoring that rule, and maybe—just maybe—your style and voice will be stronger because of it.
I have certainly read my fair share of writing advice that I disagree with. “Don’t use a thesaurus,” says Stephen King, and I want to chuck my beloved thesaurus at his head. “Write what you know,” says Every Writing Instructor Ever, and I say, that’s dumb, I’m going to write what I’m curious about.
But I find most advice in these guides thoughtful and helpful, and I have yet to hear someone say, “You know, my writing really took a turn for the worst after I read that book on plot structure.”
So—don’t be afraid to learn and keep learning.
5. Be patient.
Yes, there are writers who were published when they were seventeen years old, but there are also writers who weren’t published until they were seventy. There are writers who hit the jackpot with their first manuscript, and there are some who have twenty rejected novels sitting on their computer. Getting published involves diligence, hard work, determination, and—yes—luck. The whims of the market cannot be ignored. There are a lot of factors outside of your control.
But one thing that is within your control is the work itself. So take the time you need to write The Best Book You Are Currently Capable of Writing.
By which I mean: Research. Read writing guides. Revise. Edit. Use critique partners and listen closely to their feedback. Do not rush through your revisions and edits just because you want to be published nooooooooowwww. Rather, take the time you need to bring your work to a quality that will set it apart from all the other writers in an agent or editor’s inbox. That might be a few extra months, or it might be a few extra years, but it will not be wasted time.
The work itself is the one thing you have control over, so don’t rush it.
6. Also… write. And keep writing.
Certainly I could come up with many more tips for this list: Read widely and often. Treat writing like a job. Strike the words “writer’s block” from your vocabulary. Do your best not to compare your career with someone else’s. And on and on.
But of all the writing advice in the whole entire world, this might be the only advice that really matters.
Good luck and much inspiration to you all!
Anyone wanting to impart their own wisdom is welcome to share in the comments.
Last year for Christmas I bought myself a treadmill desk—something that had been on my writer wish list for years. I put it off for a long time though, as I find that most exercise equipment gets used for a month, then gathers dust for a few years, until finally making its way into a garage sale.
But then I read A.J. Jacobs’s marvelously entertaining and informative Drop Dead Healthy, in which he talks at length about the benefits of a treadmill desk—so I decided to go for it.
Trying the desk for the first time.
Here we are, eight months later, and I can tell you that this remains one of my favorite purchases ever. (I am, in fact, writing this blog post on it!) So if you’ve been on the fence about getting yourself a treadmill desk, like I was, or maybe this is the first you’ve heard of such a thing, allow me to try and persuade you.
The Health Benefits
First, I think it’s important to point out that the treadmill desk does not act as a replacement for regular exercise. You are typically going to be walking so slowly on it that any aerobic effects are going to stay pretty mild.
Rather, the treadmill desk should be viewed as an antidote to sitting, which the experts are telling us is the biggest health problem facing our society today.
Turns out, sitting for 8+ hours a day is bad for us. Really, really bad.
And we writers, we sit. A LOT.
(Miranda Kenneally recently posted about her own sitting-related health issues on her blog, in case you weren’t aware of how horrible it can become: http://mirandakenneally.com/2014/07/30/psa-side-effects-of-spending-too-much-time-on-the-computer/)
By taking even just an hour or two every day and changing your routine from sitting to walking (or even standing if a treadmill isn’t in your budget), we can begin to counteract some of those awful effects.
Am I sounding like an infomercial yet? Oops. *tries to tone down the sales pitch*
Lots of studies have also found that our brains work better when we get regular exercise, and even better during that exercise. I’ve seen this firsthand in the amount of plot ideas I’ve gotten over the years while I was jogging or dancing or in the middle of a yoga class.
With my treadmill desk, I find that I rarely get those light bulb moments that I get during more strenuous exercise, but I do focus better. In fact, on days when I’m feeling distracted and can’t concentrate on a task, hopping on my treadmill desk is the best way for me to get back to work. I liken it to locking yourself in a room with nothing but a pen and pad of paper. You have nothing better to do—so you might as well get to work! Likewise with the treadmill, once I’m on it my brain seems to recognize that this is work time, and off we go.
Dedicated Time to Do . . . Whatever Needs Doing
I know plenty of writers who use their treadmill desks for actual writing, and I can and have gotten writing done on mine, too. But I’ve found that for me the treadmill desk offers a perfect solution to separating “writing” from “everything else I’m supposed to do on a daily basis.”
Mostly, I love to use the treadmill for blog posts and answering emails, things that I will put off until the end of time if I allow myself. But now, I hop on my treadmill desk every morning, set the timer on my phone, and get to work. By the end of an hour I’ll have a completed blog post or a significantly reduced inbox, when I know that that same hour would have been full of other distractions if I’d tried to do it at my normal desk.
On top of that, just like being on the treadmill tells my brain “it’s time to work” (a.k.a. answer emails, write blog posts, respond to blogger interviews… whatever the current task is), stepping off the treadmill tells my brain “it’s time to sit down and write.” I’ve found the distinction between the two to be enormously helpful.
You Can Use It As a Reward, Too
Sometimes, when I know I’ve spent too much time sitting lately, I’ll use my treadmill in conjunction with a reward. “Finish this chapter and you can hop on the treadmill desk and read a few chapters of a book.” Or “Finish these copyedits and you can hop on the treadmill desk and watch the newest episode of Sailor Moon Crystal.” My brain thinks it’s getting a prize, while my body is grateful to get up and move.
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Now that you’re ready to run out and buy one for yourself, here are some things to consider . . .
Type of Treadmill: Not all treadmills are created equal. Some, like those you see at the gym, are intended for short durations at faster speeds—you know, like jogging or sprinting. But there are treadmills specifically designed for longer periods at slower speeds. Walking treadmills. This is what you’ll want. You can jog on them, but they’ll generally max out at about 4 miles per hour. (The treadmill salesman likened it to a car—you wouldn’t drive on the freeway in first gear, would you? Then you wouldn’t want to continuously walk at 2-miles-an-hour on a running treadmill, either.)
Ergonomics and Set-Up: All you need in your set up is a flat surface that goes across your treadmill where you can set your computer, but for maximum health benefits, try to take ergonomics into account. The top of your computer screen should be at eye-level and your elbows should be at a ninety-degree angle when settled on your keyboard. A wrist pad is an excellent investment, too. I splurged and got a super fancy keyboard that splits down the middle so that my wrists can be in as neutral a position as possible—it took some getting used to at first, but now I LOVE this keyboard and use it at my regular desk, too.
Speed and Balance: Whenever I tell someone about my treadmill desk, the first response is usually: “I couldn’t do that—I would totally fall off!”
No. No, you wouldn’t. Trust me on this—it isn’t nearly as difficult to walk and type as it looks! Though it might take some getting used to, especially if you are not in the habit of touch-typing, I have never once felt off-balance or in danger of falling off the treadmill.
Partly I think that people are assuming they would walk fast—like you do at the gym. But I generally keep my speed around 2mph (a casual stroll for most people is about 3mph—so we’re talking very slow here!) Again, it isn’t a replacement for exercise, just an antidote to sitting.
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If you’ve been debating a treadmill desk but weren’t sure, here is my hearty recommendation. I love mine and wish I’d gotten it much sooner.
Thoughts/questions? And if you already have a treadmill desk, let us know how you feel about it in the comments!
The upcoming Fierce Reads tour dates and cities are confirmed! I hope you can come join us for some shenanigans this fall.
*** See the dates and locations for the September leg of the tour, featuring Ann Aguirre, Caragh O’Brien, and Marie Rutkoski at http://fiercereads.com/tour/. ***
I will be on the October leg of the tour, along with Gennifer Albin, Nikki Kelly, and Jessica Brody.
(Event times to be determined. I always recommend checking with the bookstore or library to confirm final details.)
Geek Girl Con
Los Altos, CA
Linden Tree Books
The winner of the Fierce Reads Video Contest: http://fiercereads.com/contest/
New York, NY
Barnes & Noble, Tribeca
Don’t see your city on the list? Enter our video contest for your chance to win a Fierce Reads tour stop on October 13!
I’ve been getting lots of questions lately about what my characters look like—even down to specifics, like how tall they are. For ease of use and to encourage all ye fanartists (and maybe inspire some of you for the Design a Sticker contest!), here are the character profiles that have been living in my Lunar Chronicles folder for many years.
If you notice anything that does not fit with what is written in the books, and you can point to a specific passage that contradicts what I have here, please feel free to mention it in the comments. Some times things change during writing, and it’s been a long time since I compared these profiles to the books.
If you would like to see inspiration photos that I’ve used, check out my Lunar Chronicles Pinterest Board here: http://www.pinterest.com/marissameyer22/the-lunar-chronicles
***PROFILES INCLUDE SPOILERS FOR THE FIRST THREE BOOKS ***
CINDER (LINH CINDER)
Birth date/place: Luna; December 21, 109 T.E., Sagittarius
Race: Lunar (mixed ethnicity—Asian/Caucasian?, tan skin, even more tan from walking everywhere)
Eye color: brown
Hair color/style: straight, fine, brunette, just below shoulders; often wears messy ponytails
Build: 5’8”, slender, few curves, almost boyish
Glamour: similar to Channary’s, breathtaking, she’s tempted to hide her cyborg parts but tries to fight it
Style of dress: comfortable and utilitarian
First book: cargo pants, T-shirts, dirty gloves, boots, messenger bag, occasional tool belt
Ball: Peony’s silver dress, Pearl’s white velvet boots that lace over the ankles, stained white silk gloves with seed pearls on hem that Kai gave her Prison: White cotton jumpsuit, bulky and loose, no shoes
Gloves: Cinder wears gloves exclusively for first book, usu. work gloves, but also thinner cotton gloves when not working. Kai gives her above-the-elbow white silk gloves with seed pearls on the hem for the ball
Cyborg characteristics: “Her control panel, her synthetic hand and leg, wires that trailed from the base of her skull all the way down her spine and out to her prosthetic limbs. The scar tissue where flesh met metal. A small dark square in her wrist—her ID chip, the metal vertebrae along her spine, or the four metal ribs, or the synthetic tissue around her heart (two chambers made primarily of silicon mixed with bio tissue), or the metal splints along the bones in her right leg. Ratio: 36.28%.”
Has a latch in the back of her head that opens, revealing control panel beside brain (no brain tissue can be seen behind it).
Can’t blush because it keeps her from overheating, but she can sweat. Can’t cry because tear ducts replaced with prosthetic eyes.
Prostheses: steel in first book. Left leg to mid-thigh (calf includes hollow compartment), left ankle attached via screws and red and yellow (and multicolored) wires; left hand to wrist.
New limbs (beginning at end of book one): new hand and foot. Plated with 100% titanium, fingers include: flashlight, stiletto knife, projectile gun, screwdriver, universal connector cable. Twelve tranquilizer darts are stored in palm.
Mannerisms: She has a nervous tick of fiddling with the hems of her gloves to make sure her metal hand is always covered. She also has a bad habit of pushing her hair out of her face when her hands are filthy, leaving grease stains on her forehead. She is ambidextrous. Often twirling tools in her fingers. Bites insides of cheek.
KAI (KAITO, CROWN PRINCE OF THE EASTERN COMMONWEALTH)
Birth date/place: New Beijing, Eastern Commonwealth; 7 April 108 T.E.; Aries
Eye color: copper-brown
Hair color/style: shaggy, straight black hair worn past ears, slicked back for formal occasions
Build: 5’11”, slender/borderline lanky
Style of dress: Suits and dress-shirts, although would rather be in jeans and Ts. Probably has a stylist telling him what to wear. For formal occasions, traditional mandarin-style silk shirts with fine embroidery and embellishments. Gray-hooded sweatshirt (incognito).
Physical characteristics: Handsome with angled, sharp facial features and “admirable” lips, smells faintly of soap
Mannerisms: Scratches at neck and ear when tongue-tied; ears turn red first when he blushes; quick to smile (looks for the humor in everything); yanks hand through hair when overwhelmed. Hands in pockets.
Birth date/place: Rieux, France, European Federation, 17 August 108 T.E., Leo
Eye color: big brown eyes
Hair color/style: curly/unruly ginger-red hair to mid-back
Build: 5’6”, curvy
Style of dress: jeans and a red hoodie that her grandma gave her, clashes with her hair which is part of the reason why she likes it.
Characteristics: full lips, lots of freckles
Mannerisms: tries to make herself look bigger/stronger with folded arms, wide-leg stances, etc. Frank and abrupt, has a tendency to act first and think later.
WOLF (ZE’EV KESLEY)
Birth date/place: Luna, Nov. 4, 102 T.E., Scorpio
Race: Lunar (olive-toned skin—think Middle Eastern)
Eye color: strikingly bright green, thick eyelashes
Hair color/style: messy brown hair that tends to spike in all directions, refuses to be tamed
Build: 6’4”, super muscular
Style of dress: loose gray pants (almost like sweats), plain t-shirts or tanks, barefoot whenever possible, otherwise comfortable leather boots [wears military uniform when not “undercover”]
Other characteristics: tattoo “LSOP962″ on left forearm; sharp canine teeth; covered in scars and wounds, some recent, some faded, including a bad gouge on his left arm from wrist to elbow, and more on his left temple and lips.
Mannerisms: protective stance, tense shoulders like he’s always ready to fight, often flexing fingers and making fists, snarling, trouble holding eye contact, shy around people, high metabolism, fidgety and constantly pacing, always hungry
CRESS (short for CRESCENT MOON)
Birth date/place: Luna, July 18, 110 T.E., Cancer
Race: Lunar (pale skin, Caucasian)
Eye color: bright blue
Hair color/style: honey blonde, insanely long at start of novel: “longest, waviest, most unruly mess of tangled blonde hair imaginable. The golden nest around her head was tied in a big knot over one shoulder, and cascaded in a jumble of braids and snarls, wrapping around one of the girl’s arms before descending out of the screen’s view.” Later cut above shoulders with a knife, so very ragged/blunt throughout Book Three.
Build: 5’0”, petite and slender
Face: sweet, heart-shaped with freckles across nose and cheeks, dimples, giddy smile
Style of dress: worn day dresses in satellite, no shoes (while on satellite)
Mannerisms: Always fidgeting with hair, toys and sucks on it, wraps it around wrists (when long). Tries to make herself smaller/invisible. Would sooner hide than fight. Flighty and nervous around people. Draws strength from overactive imagination.
THORNE (“CAPTAIN” CARSWELL THORNE)
Birth date/place: American Republic, May 22, 106 T.E., Gemini
Race: Earthen (Caucasian)
Eye color: blue
Hair color/style: short brown hair, usually with product (always wants to look his best), clean-shaven (after free from prison at least)
Build: 6’0”, broad-shouldered and strong, but not as muscular as Wolf
Style of dress: well-dressed, button-up dress-shirts with rolled sleeves or slim-fitting sweaters, vests, loves his leather jacket, prefers the “dressy” military uniforms to the utilitarian ones.
Mannerisms: checking that his hair is okay, admiring every woman he sees, whistling, making light of the situation. Cocky swagger. Flirtation smiles and raised eyebrows. Still labeled a “cadet” in military (though deserter), but insists on being called Captain.
PRINCESS WINTER HAYLE-BLACKBURN
Birth date/place: Luna, 3 January 109 T.E., Capricorn
Race: Lunar (black)
Eye color: golden-brown with flecks of gray around the pupils
Hair color/style: black, tight corkscrew curls, just below shoulder-length, very thick
Build: 5’9”, slender but with enviable curves, extremely graceful limbs, long neck
Face: high cheekbones, full red lips, delicate nose, ridiculously long eyelashes—the kind of face that is difficult to look away from; three scars on her right cheek, like teardrops from the corner of her eye to her chin; known as the most beautiful girl on Luna
Style of dress: sophisticated and conservative, both flowy skirts and pants but always feminine, likes to wear pastels and light colors, silvers, gauzy fabrics, etc.
Mannerisms: gentle and graceful, but crazy, whimsical voice and flighty gestures, almost skips when she walks, has a tendency to wander off, comfortable around people (except Lunar aristocracy) but has a habit of getting into their personal space and making them uncomfortable. Playful.
JACIN CLAY: royal guard; personal guard and pilot for Sybil.
Birth date/place: Luna, 8 July 107 T.E., Cancer
Race: Lunar (Caucasian)
Eye color: blue-gray
Hair color/style: blonde-white hair that falls in straight locks passed his chin, sometimes pulls into a ponytail
Build: 6’2”, muscular, graceful from combat training
Style of dress: official uniform of Lunar guards
Mannerisms: rigid, tense posture; confident and capable—rarely second guesses himself; makes few hand gestures—always trying to go unnoticed; usually quiet but harsh when he does talk; abrasive personality; will do anything to protect the ones he truly cares about